I know that you do a lot of tongue in cheek in this story. I respect that you are trying to drive some points home, but I think that you were a little too much over the top in this chapter. It is the first chapter that I have read that I really didn't like and I do like the story. My .02
Robert Seward
Monday, September 08, 2008 4:09 pm
A positive was seeing Robert P. checking his stats too much and just writing what he wants and not what he had to. That's the way people are.
